He diligently prepared for the interview. Reading and rereading the formulas, editing his notes until the only legible words appeared on the margins. He shook hands, took note of the heat, and took hold of the blade. It was duller than expected, but no one said it would be easy.
"took note of the heat, and took hold of the blade" is a strong paring of words and a good use of repetition.
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