Tuesday, April 12, 2011

Talk show

Audience applauds. Host enters. Smiles. Sincerly complements the audience on strength of thier applause. Audience applauds louder. Host sarcastically states he is not worthy of such a warm reception. Audience applauds louder. Host now questions the sincerity of the applause. Audience applauds louder. Host runs offstage, questioning his self-esteem.
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  1. AndrewApril 13, 2011 at 2:36 AM

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  2. AndrewApril 13, 2011 at 2:38 AM

    Poor host. There is a strange tension that you build in this story. I know this is a scene and that we can't write scenes anymore... but because you cut all the fat out of the verbage, you are able to fit so much into a small space that it reads more like a story due to quantity of information and development of the tension I mentioned. (I'm a on a fucking awful rhyming spree lately) These are all very good things. Also, typos are hard to avoid at 5:37am, god dman

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